On this planet there are different types of people wich also have different thoughts, but they have very clear that respect is one of the most important values. There are shy in some cases but not in all, are usually very outgoing, when they have some crazy idea usually made without much thought so they are very impulsive. These people do not let other tell you what to do, usually do what they want . They live one day at a time, but nevertheless somewhat concerned about their future, but try not affect them.
Are people who hate hypocry, therefore they are very very honest people. Also do not like people who are shallow and only care about physical and material aspects. They are people who like to see the inner of a person and not just the physical and material things. They worry about the real feelings of a person. Are sensitive and always try to help each other, love to listen to others but also to listen to them. Have character and do not let other people with different thougths influence their decisions , have its own criteria.Have no problem showing their feelings openly. Are in love and struggle to find true love.
But there are not only good things there are also negative aspects. Often are paranoid because they are perfeccionist and when something goes wrong they can be confused much. Are often self-centred and very much proud.
The peolpe for this planet are similar to venusian because they care about their feelings and do not feel ashamed of expresing, and are similar to martians becasuse in some cases they are proud and i think that the people in mars do not like others to help them with their problems and that shows some pride.
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ResponderEliminarHi Rosario!!! :-D
ResponderEliminarLife in AMIRAT planet sounds great, I really enjoyed reading the life style in your planet.
I like that everyone is different and kind of crazy, also they value other people feelings that's really important and sounds similar to venusians.
I see that love and values in your planet are so important for that reason I think that habitants in Amirat are really alike alike with Mars habitants.
People from your planet are outgoing it is a sharing characteristic with Never Landers (people from my planet. It is very similar to my planet because there people care about others feelings. Also it is different because in never Land people are extrovertive and in your planet they are shy.
Well Rosario summarizing your planet it's great and I really like to visit one time...Can you invite me please???
Talking about grammar and ideas it was a great work, I read that "when they have an idea they made them" I think that you can't made an idea.
Also you wrote "there are shy" I think that is better to use "they are"..or "there are shy people".
You started a paragraph with "are people" I think that is better if you use "there are".
You wrote "the people for this planet" I think is better is next time you use from.
Finally try to use contractions instead do not, I think that it looks better. :-D
You did an excellent and interesting job, congratulations!!! have a nice week.
Almost everything is good but I think that people is suppose to be proud of their achieves or goals they reach but not about everything and being perfectionist is good as long as you don't get extreme about it people got to focus on making everything good but no one can thing that he is the best of all because there is going to be one better than you always...
ResponderEliminarHi Rosario!
ResponderEliminarFirst, Andrea's right, you need to include "they" in some of those sentences; in fact, in quite a few instances, you're missing a subject, and in English that doesn't work.
She's also right that your description is detailed and interesting. I'd also like to visit your planet!
Now, I'll be waiting for your homework assignment from AP6!
David,
I'm not sure what you mean. Are you referring to Rosario's planet?